Tell me what you think, honestly, be harsh if you want!!!?

Question

Tell me what you think, honestly, be harsh if you want!!!?
I live with this lifelong pain

Answer

first of all, its a really amazing poem, I wish I could write poetry like that. But I can still help you because there are a couple of grammatical errors more my forte lolbrbrJust so you know if its in squared brackets i changed itbrbrbrI lived with all that searing painbrMy skin was embedded in that chainbrMy water bowl was always drybrI just didnt understand whybrThere was dirt caked on all my pawsbrA reminder of my owners flawsbrbrAnd the sun so painfully hotbrThey left me there to die and rot?br Then one day some people camebr They took me awaybr My neck went from bloody and sorebr And then wasnt visible anymore.br They didnt keep me long br Please tell me what I did wrong br Now everyday I watch you pass bybr Why wont you look me in the eye?br Maybe youd give me a handout or two.br Something, anything to help pull me through.br But yet you keep walkingbr While I keep squawkingbr Trying to get your attention.brMy body could not take any more tension.brAll you could see were my bonesbrAll you could hear were my painful moans.brMy mouth was so dry,brGet your attention? I had to trybrThen one day someone stoppedbrThey didnt give me a handout though.brThey took me with thembrThey gave me water and foodbrThen put in a cage that people viewedbrThen gave me to new ownersbrWho then set me freebrIm no longer a sore for sight.brCause I have owners that treat me rightbrbrbrbrHope i helpedbrbrI dont understand the bit with the asterixes sorrybrbrbr